Marlowe, Wisecracks and the Chandler Style

"The most durable thing in writing", Raymond Chandler once said in a letter to a magazine editor, "is style." And the style which Chandler himself brought to the hard-boiled crime story made him one of the most admired American novelists, as well as - together with Ernest Hemingway - the most imitated. His influence on modern crime fiction has been immense, particularly in the writing style and attitudes that much of the field has adopted over the last 60 years.

All seen of Chandler's novels are first-person narratives. The wry tone of his hero, Philip Marlowe, is established in the first paragraph of the first novel in the sequence, The Big Sleep:


"It was about seven o'clock in the morning, mid October, with the sun not shining and a look of hard wet rain in the clearness of the foothills. I was wearing my powder-blue suit, with dark blue shirt, tie and display handkerchief, black brogues, black wool socks with dark blue clocks on them. I was neat, clean, shaved and sober, and I didn't care who knew it. I was everything the well-dressed private detective ought to be. I was calling on four million dollars."


Through Marlowe, Chandler was able to exploit to the full his gift for the wisecrack. In Farewell, My Lovely, Moose Malloy is said to look "about as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a slice of an angel food", and when Marlowe is passed a photograph, he says it depicts a blonde. A blonde to make a bishop kick a hole in a stained glass window.'
But there is much more to Chandler than witty and original phrase-making. To appreciate the books to the full, it helps to know a  little about the author's life.   

"She was trouble. She was tall and rangy and strong-looking. Her hair was black and wiry and parted in the middle. She had a good mouth and a good chin. There was a sulky droop to her lips and the lower lip was full." (from The Big Sleep, 1939 )

Raymond Thornton Chandler was born on July 23, 1888 in Chicago, IL, of an American father and an Anglo-Irish mother, he moved with his mother to England when his parents divorced. He had a classical education at Dulwich College where, like P. G. Wodehouse - who was only six years older - he acquired feeling for language which would permeate every sentence he wrote as an adult. Indeed, when his admirer J.B. Priestley remarked, "They don't write like that at Dulwich", Chandler commented "That may be, but if I hadn't grown up on Latin and Greek, I doubt I would know so well how to draw the line between what I call a vernacular style and what I should call an illiterate or faux naif style."

"It was a blonde. A blonde to make a bishop kick a hole in a stained glass window." (from Farewell, My Lovely, 1940)


Chandler studied languages in France and Germany before returning to England in 1907 and becoming a naturalized British subject. Lack of vented Chandler from going up to either Oxford or Cambridge, he took a civil service job in the Admiralty which he left in 1912 to return to the United States, settling in California. After the U.S. entered World War I he enlisted in the Canadian Army, then transferred to the Royal Flying Corps. After the Armistice he returned to California, married a woman eighteen years his senior, and got a series of bookkeeping jobs, finally becoming a vice-president with the Dabney Oil syndicate where he achieved much success in the boom years which preceded the Depression. All along, he had been submitting stories, poems, sketches and essays to a number of periodicals, but when the Depression hit and the bottom fell out of the oil business, he lost his job and turned to writing full-time. But he was not a happy man; he womanised and drank too much. He sought solace in writing. In England, he had turned out a number of poems, articles and reviews, but now he found a niche with stories of the “hard-boiled” school popularized by Dashiell Hammett (1894-1961), and had many of his early stories accepted by 'Black Mask', the same 'pulp' mystery magazine that had first published Hammett

Raymond Chandler wrote realistically in deliberate opposition to the English style of drawing-room puzzle mysteries where an amateur detective always knows more than the police and clues turn up at just the right moment; he dismissed these plots as “having God sit in your lap.” He read widely in the mystery genre, but the intricate and bloodless novels of English writers, such as Agatha Christie and Dorothy L. Sayers, appealed to him much less than the terse stories of Dashiell Hammett, who, according to Chandler, "wrote scenes that seemed never to have been written before". But when Chandler tried his hand at crime, he resolved to get a bit more interested in people than in violent death.


Chandler's first story, 'Blackmailers Don't Shoot', appeared in 'Black Mask' magazine in December 1933 and was followed during the next five years by a score of powerfully written tales, crammed with imagery, which surpassed in quality the work of all his contemporaries. A careful writer, never prolific, Chandler was serving a long but invaluable literary apprenticeship. Devising puzzles was always less important to him than style. He said, "I don't really seem to take the mystery element in the detective story as seriously should", and joked about solving plot problems by having a man come to the door with a gun.  Style mattered much more: "I had learn American just like a foreign language. To learn it I had to study and analyse it. As a result, when I use slang . . . I do it deliberately."  And as he told one magazine editor whose proof-reader presumed to tidy up the Chandler grammar, "When I split an infinitive, God damn it, I split it so it will stay split."

"In everything that can be called art there is a quality of redemption. It may be pure tragedy, if it is high tragedy, and it may be pity and irony, and it may be the raucous laughter of the strong man. But down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean, who is neither tarnished nor afraid. The detective in this kind of story must be such a man." (The Simple Art of Murder, 1944) 

During the thirties, Chandler experimented with a number detective heroes. One of them, a forerunner of Marlowe, was called Mallory and that surname itself provides a clue to the concept with which Chandler grappled throughout his career - that of the private eye as chivalric knight of the modern age. In his essay 'The Simple Art of Murder', Chandler articulated his thinking in terms which have become famous. He said that for him the detective "is the hero; he is everything. He must be a complete man and a common man and an unusual man. He must be, to use a rather weathered phrase, a man of honour... He talks as the man of his age talks - that is, with rude wit, a lively sense of the grotesque, a disgust for sham, and a contempt for pettiness."


In every one of the novels, the world is seen through Marlowe's eyes with Chandler's double vision: half-English, half-America; half-romantic, half-cynical. That sense of honour is everywhere apparent; typical examples in The Long Goodbye are the way in which Marlowe resists a married woman client's attempt to seduce him, and his reluctance to spend the five-thousand-dollar bill keeps in his safe because "there was something wrong with the way I got it." Yet there is often an element of moral ambiguity in the stories, for Marlowe is well aware that he is operating in a corrupt world. The sense of alienation from society at large, which Chandler seems to have felt throughout his life, is reflected in the detective's attitudes and helps give the books - for all that they are firmly rooted in a specific time and place, mid-century California -a modern and universal quality. What Chandler has to say, for instance, in The Long Goodbye about friendship and betrayal, about police brutality and the dangers of concentrating too much power in the hands of a limited number of newspaper proprietors, might well have been written last week.

"The pebbled glass door pane is lettered in flaked black paint: 'Philip Marlowe... Investigations.' It is a reasonably shabby door at the end of a reasonably shabby corridor in the sort of building that was new about the year the all-tile bathroom became the basis of civilization. The door is locked, but next to it is another door with the same legend which is not locked. Come on in - there is nobody in here but me and a big bluebottle. But not if you're from Manhattan, Kansas." (from The Little Sister, 1949)

His hero Philip Marlowe was a flawed and lonely but reflective and honest hero; his philosophy is summed up in a passage from The High Window (1942):

"Until you guys own your own souls you don't own mine. Until you guys can be trusted every time and always, in all times and conditions, to seek the truth out and find it and let the chips fall where they may--until that time comes, I have a right to listen to my conscience, and protect my client the best way I can."

Marlowe was, as Chandler admitted, "a creature of fantasy. He is in a false position because I put him there. In real life a man of his type would no more be a private detective than a university don." Yet in a series of notes which he wrote about mystery novels, he said that crime fiction "must be realistic as to character, setting and atmosphere." That an essentially unreal character should become much more believable than, say, Lord Peter Wimsey or Hercule Poirot is a mark of Chandler's literary skill. There is no better illustration of that skill than the way in which the locale of the books is portrayed. Wisecracks, naturally, play their part. Los Angeles has "as much personality as a paper cup." California is "the department store state: the most of everything and the best of nothing." The economy of expression, the use of similes, help to build up the picture. And crisp but illuminating contrasts are also brilliantly employed in longer passages, as in the second paragraph of The Little Sister :


"It was one of those clear, bright summer mornings we get in the early spring in California before the high fog sets in. The rains are over The hills are still green and in the valley across the Hollywood Hills you can see snow on the high mountains. The fur stores are advertising their annual sales. The call houses that specialize in sixteen year-old virgins are doing a land-office business. And Beverly Hills the jacaranda trees are beginning to bloom."


Six of all seven Chandler's novels have been adapted for film, most notably The Big Sleep (1946), directed by Howard Hawks and starring Humphrey Bogart and Lauren BACALL. Novelist William Faulkner also received a screenwriting credit for this film. The influence of Chandler's screenwriting, as limited as it was, and the adaptation of his novels to screen in the 1940's were important influences on American Film Noir.

Inevitably, Chandler's vivid writing attracted the attention of Hollywood moguls and in 1943 he went to work as a script writer For Paramount Pictures. He worked on films which are still admired today, such as Double Indemnity, The Blue Dahlia and Strangers on a Train, and like said before his own novels were adapted for the big screen with much success, but the 'endless contention of tawdry egos' in movie world irked him. Robert Mitchum explained he problem simply, and no doubt accurately, when he said that Chandler wasn't 'one of the boys'. Yet the discipline of turning out screenplay undoubtedly tightened Chandler's style: similes occur less frequently in the later novels, but his touch in establishing an incident or scene becomes ever surer. And whereas the story-line of The Big Sleep was an amalgam of two of the early pulp stories, the final novel, Playback, was based on a script which he wrote for Universal.

His wife's long illness in the 1950's caused Chandler much distress and increased his sense of isolation. After she died, he made an inept attempt at suicide and drank ever more heavily. He started to spend much more time in England, where he was lionised, but he was aware that the quality of his writing, like his health, was in decline. He decided to marry Marlowe off to a multi-millionaire's daughter, but he recognised that it was probably a mistake. In one of his last letters he said of his hero: 'I see him always in a lonely street, in lonely rooms, puzzled but never quite defeated.' 

During the last year of his life Chandler was president of the Mystery Writers of America. He died from pneumonia brought on by a particularly heavy drinking binge on March 26, 1959. His funeral was attended by only a handful of people.

For all Chandler's personal unhappiness, his books continue to provide endless pleasure. There is so much to be savoured. W. H. Auden wrote that Chandler was "interested in writing, not detective stories, but serious studies of a criminal milieu, the Great Wrong Place." One of Chandler's most successful disciples, the novelist Robert B. Parker, has argued that the poet underestimated the triumphant quality of the novels: referring to the opening of The Little Sister, he says that Marlowe's triumph 'is not that he prevents the call houses. It is that he sees the jacaranda.' But few would disagree with Auden's conclusion that Chandler's books 'should be read and judged, not as escape literature, but as works of art.' 

 Chandler created a body of work that ranks with the best of twentieth-century literature.

 

Novels  

(Note: all dates refer to first US publication)

 

  • The Big Sleep (1939)
  • Farewell, My Lovely (1940)
  • The High Window (1942)
  • The Lady In The Lake (1943)
  • The Little Sister (1949)
  • The Long Goodbye (1954)
  • Playback (1959)
  • Poodle Springs (first 4 chapters only; novel later completed and published by Robert Parker.  Parker then went on to write a sequel to The Big Sleep, entitled Perchance To Dream.)

 

 

Screenplays

 

 

 

Short Stories

 

 

 

Collections

 

 

 

 

A collection of similes, one-liners, and turns of phrase that could be written only by Raymond Chandler.



"On the dance floor half a dozen couples were throwing themselves around with the reckless abandon of a night watchman with arthritis." -- Playback (Chapter 8)

"Dead men are heavier than broken hearts."-- The Big Sleep (Chapter 8)

"She's dark and lovely and passionate. And very, very kind."
"And exclusive as a mailbox," I said."
-- The Little Sister (Chapter 19)

"It was a cool day and very clear. You could see a long way--but not as far as Velma had gone."-- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 41)

"I put the duster away folded with the dust in it, leaned back and just sat, not smoking, not even thinking. I was a blank man. I had no face, no meaning, no personality, hardly a name. I didn't want to eat. I didn't even want a drink. I was the page from yesterday's calendar crumpled at the bottom of the waste basket "-- The Little Sister (Chapter 25)

"Eddie Mars wanted to see me."
"I didn't know you knew him. Why?"
"I don't mind telling you. He thought I was looking for somebody he thought had run away with his wife."
"Were you?"
"No."
"Then what did you come for?"
"To find out why he thought I was looking for somebody he thought had run away with his wife."
"Did you find out?"
"No."
-- The Big Sleep (Chapter 23)

"Tall, aren't you?" she said.
"I didn't mean to be."
Her eyes rounded. She was puzzled. She was thinking. I could see, even on that short acquaintance, that thinking was always going to be a bother to her."
-- The Big Sleep (Chapter 1)

"I never saw any of them again - except the cops. No way has yet been invented to say goodbye to them." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 52)

"Then he picked the glass up and tasted it and sighed again and shook his head sideways with a half smile; the way a man does when you give him a drink and he needs it very badly and it is just right and the first swallow is like a peek into a cleaner, sunnier, brighter world." -- The High Window (Chapter 15)

"The minutes went by on toptoe, with their fingers to their lips." -- The Lady in the Lake (Chapter 1)

"She smelled the way the Taj Mahal looks by moonlight." -- The Little Sister (Chapter 12)

"I'm an occational drinker, the kind of guy who goes out for a beer and wakes up in Singapore with a full beard." -- "The King in Yellow" (Short story, 1938)

"The big foreign car drove itself, but I held the wheel for the sake of appearances." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 9)

"Then her hands dropped and jerked at something and the robe she was wearing came open and underneath it she was as naked as September Morn but a darn sight less coy." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 29)


"Across the street somebody had delirium tremens in the front yard and a mixed quartet tore what was left of the night into small strips and did what they could to make the strips miserable. While this was going on the exotic brunette didn't move more that one eyelash." -- "Red Wind" (Section 5; 1938)


"To say she had a face that would have stopped a clock would have been to insult her.It would have stopped a runaway horse." -- The Little Sister


"I felt like an amputated leg." -- "Trouble Is My Business" (Section 4; 1950)


"The corridor which led to it had a smell of old carpet and furniture oil and the drab anonymity of a thousand shabby lives." -- The Little Sister (Chapter 9)


"She gave me a smile I could feel in my hip pocket." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 18)


"Down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean, who is neither tarnished nor afraid. He is the hero, he is everything. He must be a complete man and a common man and yet an unusual man. He must be, to use a rather weathered phrase, a man of honor, by instinct, by inevitability, without thought of it, and certainly without saying it. He must be the best man in his world and a good enough man for any world." -- "The Simple Art of Murder" (essay, 1944)


"I needed a drink, I needed a lot of life insurance, I needed a vacation, I needed a home in the country. What I had was a coat, a hat and a gun." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 34)


"I was neat, clean, shaved and sober, and I didn't care who knew it." -- The Big Sleep (Chapter 1)


"San Diego? One of the most beautiful harbors in the world and nothing in it but navy and a few fishing boats. At night it is fairyland. The swell is as gentle as an old lady singing hymns. But Marlowe has to get home and count the spoons." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 6)


"She's a charming middle age lady with a face like a bucket of mud and if she's washed her hair since Coolidge's second term, I'll eat my spare tire, rim and all."  -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 6)


"A white night for me is as rare as a fat postman." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 12)


"The General spoke again, slowly, using his strength as carefully as an out-of-work show-girl uses her last good pair of stockings." -- The Big Sleep (Chapter 2)


"I was neat, clean, shaved and sober, and I didn't care who knew it." -- The Big Sleep (Chapter 1)


"There was a desert winf blowing that night. It was one of those hot dry Santa Anas that come down through the mountain passes and curl your hair and make your nerves jump and your sking itch. On nights like that every booze party ends in a fight. Meek little wives feel the edge of the carving knife and study their husbands' necks. Anything can happen. You can even get a full glass of beer at a cocktail lounge."-- "Red Wind" (opening paragraph; 1938)


"His smile was as stiff as a frozen fish." -- "The Man Who Liked Dogs" (Short story, 1936)


"I belonged in Idle Valley like a pearl onion on a banana split." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 13)


"Even on Central Avenue, not the quietest dressed street in the world, he looked about as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a slice of angel food." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 1)


"What did it matter where you lay once you were dead?  In a dirty sump or in a marble tower on top of a high hill.  You were dead, you were sleeping the big sleep, you were not bothered by things like that.  Oil and water were the same as wind and air to you.  You just slept the big sleep, not caring about the nastiness of how you died or where you fell.  Me, I was part of the nastiness now." -- The Big Sleep (Chapter 32)


"Her smile was as faint as a fat lady at a fireman's ball." -- The High Window (Chapter 3)


"At three A.M. I was walking the floor listening to Khachaturyan working in a tractor factory.  He called it a violin concerto.  I called it a loose fan belt and the hell with it." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 12)


"She opened a mouth like a firebucket and laughed.  That terminated my interest in her.  I couldn't hear the laugh but the hole in her face when she unzippered her teeth was all I needed." -- The Long Goodbye (Chapter 13)


"I walked back through the arch and started up the steps.  It was a nice walk if you liked grunting.  There were two hundred and eighty steps up to Cabrillo Street.  They were drifted over with windblown sand and the handrail was as cold and wet as a toad's belly." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 8)


"The walls here are as thin as a hoofer's wallet." -- Playback (Chapter 5)


"The voice got as cool as a cafeteria dinner." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 15)


"The kid's face had as much expression as a cut of round steak and was about the same color." -- "Red Wind" (Short story, 1938)


"If you don't leave, I'll get somebody who will." -- Chandler's notebooks


"One time in Leavenworth, just one time in all those years, Wally Sype wrapped himself around a can of white shellac and got as tight as a fat lady's girdle." -- "Goldfish" (Short story, 1936)


"Tasteless as a roadhouse blonde." -- "Spanish Blood" (Short story, 1935)


"From thirty feet away she looked like a lot of class.  From ten feet away she looked like something made up to be seen from thirty feet away." -- The High Window (Chapter 5)


"You boys are as cute as a couple of lost golf balls . . . how in the world do you do it?" -- The High Window (Chapter 23)

"She was as cute as a washtub." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 5)


"The house itself was not so much. It was smaller than Buckingham Palace, rather gray for California, and probably had fewer windows than the Chrysler Building. I sneaked over to the side entrance and pressed a bell and somewhere a set of chimes made a deep mellow sound like church bells. A man in a striped vest and gilt buttons opened the door, bowed, took my hat and was through for the day." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 18)


"I sat beside her on the yellow leather chesterfield. 'Aren't you a pretty fast worker?' she asked quietly. I didn't answer her.
'Do you do much of this sort of thing?' she asked with a sidelong look.
'Practically none. I'm a Tibetan monk, in my spare time.'
'Only you don't have any spare time." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 18)


"It was a blonde. A blonde to make a bishop kick a hole in a stained glass window." -- Farewell, My Lovely (Chapter 13)


"I called him from a phone booth. The voice that answered was fat. It wheezed softly, like the voice of a man who had just won a pie-eating contest." -- "Trouble Is My Business" (Section 2; 1950)


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Raymond Chandler is a master." -- The New York Times.

“[Chandler] wrote as if pain hurt and life mattered.” -- The New Yorker.

Chandler seems to have created the culminating American hero: wised up, hopeful, thoughtful, adventurous, sentimental, cynical and rebellious.” -- Robert B. Parker, The New York Times Book Review.

“Philip Marlowe remains the quintessential urban private eye.” -- Los Angeles Times.

“Nobody can write like Chandler on his home turf, not even Faulkner. . . . An original. . . . A great artist.” -- The Boston Book Review.

Raymond Chandler was one of the finest prose writers of the twentieth century. . . . Age does not wither Chandler’s prose. . . . He wrote like an angel.” -- Literary Review.

“[T]he prose rises to heights of unselfconscious eloquence, and we realize with a jolt of excitement that we are in the presence of not a mere action tale teller, but a stylist, a writer with a vision.” -- Joyce Carol Oates, The New York Review of Books.

Chandler wrote like a slumming angel and invested the sun-blinded streets of Los Angeles with a romantic presence.” -- Ross Macdonald.

Raymond Chandler is a star of the first magnitude.” -- Erle Stanley Gardner.

Raymond Chandler invented a new way of talking about America, and America has never looked the same to us since.” -- Paul AUSTER.

“[Chandler]’s the perfect novelist for our times. He takes us into a different world, a world that’s like ours, but isn’t.” -- Carolyn See.

 

 

 


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